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Diction — word choice

…research was conducted to depict how…
He reveals that there is a conservative, liberal, and radical theory
Collins' liberal theory to deviance states that
Collins gives three theoretical approaches…
This was concluded in the test with the babies … from
As for Freud's concept…

Linking Words

i.e. means "that is"
e.g. means "for example"
conversely : the second thing will be the logical reverse of the first
in contrast (to this) : the second thing is different from the first
on the other hand : the second thing is an alternative (way of thinking about something)
consequently : the second thing is caused by the first
thus : the second thing is logically entailed by the first
relatedly : and this reminds us of
hence : second thing is implied by the first thing


principles vs. principals
deviance not defiance
explanation — all A's
pedestal - like pedestrians
opposite — ahpoe site
monitor — monitoooor
centrifugal centrum, "center", and fugere, meaning "to flee")
centripetal, centrum "center" and petere "to seek"
from Latin centrum, meaning "center", and fugere, meaning "to flee")
complement means to complete something. compliment means to say nice things.

And, the first rule from Strunk and White: form possessive with 's